Hyun's Dojo Easter Egg Hunt 2015!

hey !
i made a manga and it's my life atm
i hope you like this shit, share to your friends if you want !


genre : shōnen, action, romance
everything we see, Kuro sees it. everything he doesn't is not shown, except it's from his imagination including his thoughts (you will never see others' thoughts).
← read from right to left ! ←

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ESCAPE: RELOADED
© Fabien Boulanger 2018

Transitions are annoying...WHY ONLY 3 PAGES?!

i'm working on the 4th page
but i have other things to do like finding an appartment for this year, or go a week to visit my granma's etc
life stuff :^)

@MCTiloAnims page 4 coming soon boi

4th page complete !

These are really good, loved the art and the comedy. The only problem i see is the transition from page 1 to page 2. I mean it goes like this
"Are you ready for more action?"

"I don't feel like doing it anymore"

"Yeah, I see"

That's too fast, the white haired guy is like very excited and when the black haired guy said that, he just accepted it really fast. It would have been more better if the white haired guy asked things like "why" and such.

You can also widen up the face when it's side view, it will make it better imo

Lol. This is great. This is legendary. Best webcomic I’ve read so far and it’s only 4 pages!! So far a masterpiece in the making!!

yeah i know, it's been a thing people said very often to me when i was making the first version of this comic xD
i mean, this is way more worked, and it's only 4 pages long atm, so i'm just saying, but expect flashbacks and backstories, this doesn't just go like that from A to B if you see what i mean, especially in this context
thanks for the criticism, always appreciate :^)


can't tell if you're being serious or sarcastic, but thanks a lot boi xDDD

5th page is done :^)

and the 6th :-D

really nice comic so far i love it