Favorites
Show All / Manage

You have no favorites.


Page 1 of 1
User avatar
Grasshopper
Toxic Joker
Image


Weapon / Power:
Name of Weapon/s:
Hook with Chain attached to it (2x)
Gains a Gauntlet made of hardened Iron in his Unleashed Joker Form
Rocket Boots-Boots that help him hover or fly

Name of Power/s:
Acid Spew- If you inhale Causes temporary Mania or paralizzation, but if touched it burns skin
Unleashed Joker- He goes crazy and his strength, speed, and intelligence are enhanced by 50% of his original skills
Spirit Summoning-He can summon 2 ghost with chains with small blades attached to them
Shadow Traveling-Can travel through and hide in shadow

Strengths:
High Pain Tolerance
Very Strategic
When he goes in to the Unleashed Joker Form Th Ghost can form into one
All of things grow stronger when he goes into his Unleashed Joker Form.

Weaknesses:
Very Stubborn
Forgetful
He acts before he thinks most of the time
The spirits can only have 2 chains for a limited time
In he's unleashed Joker Form he can only be in it for a limited time
and if he pushes him self to hard he will be paralyzed for a limited time
If there are no shadows he can not travel(not likely)

Personality:
Bipolar, Fun, Crazy, Joyful
Good at making friends

Character Bio:
After visiting a Dark Magician who's secrets had been spilled cause of him
He was cursed with powers of Dark Magic which made him go crazy and
became and outcast everywhere went to the dojo to seek help. He met up
with Hyun and is now part of the dojo and was accepted there and goes by
"The Toxic Joker" now


Animated Demo:
WIP

User avatar
Duel Mod
@ToxicJokerXL as per your request, your app has been updated and unlocked. Let's now go through the issues
1. Why does his acid cause mania and paralysation? That doesn't seem quite right for an acid.
2. Can you please explain EXACTLY what his dark magic does? Does it corrupt his enemies? Create stuff? Explain
3. For unleashed joker, all his good stats are enhanced? What are his good stats? More explanation pls.
4. What does "Gets made easily" mean? He's easily cloneable?
5. While the personal weaknesses you've listed are fine, what are some weaknesses opposing duelists can use against them? Limits on their abilities?
6. For your bio, it's very short. Can you explain why he fights, or perhaps how he came to be on Cier? Thank you.

Check out my duelist here: viewtopic.php?f=47&t=14372
Current Status: Potentially Dueling

User avatar
Duel Mod
@TonicJokerXL Okay, let's go through this, as per your request.
1. Your image I still not displaying properly. Go here for help: viewtopic.php?f=47&t=6678
2. What do the gauntlets from Unleashed Joker do? Explain.
3. What are "Dual moves"? Explain.
4. How does "Mind torture" work?
5. "As He goes in to his new form the spirits obtain 2 hacksaw chains" what is his new form? What are "hacksaw chains"?
6. How much does Unleashed Joker increase his strength and speed by?
7. He's an outcast everywhere, but makes friends easily? This seems contradictory.
Ping myself or another mod when you want another review! Best of luck!


UPDATE: Having been asked to do another review so soon, I will spoiler my earlier one an place it here.
1. IT says using Mind Torture weakens him, but that doesn't seem to be an ability of his anymore. Can you explain?
2. He's an outcast everywhere, but makes friends easily? This seems contradictory.

Check out my duelist here: viewtopic.php?f=47&t=14372
Current Status: Potentially Dueling

Page 1 of 1
Search for:

Oh dear. Looks like there was a problem.
You are using a browser that doesn't support the technology this website uses.

Don't fret. There are solutions.

Oh dear. Looks like there was a problem.
You are using a version of Internet Explorer that this site doesn't support.

Don't fret. There are solutions.