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Cirtex and Ruby

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Weapons/Powers
Cirtex : 
Semi-Automatic Pistol:
His Sidearm is a simple Semi-Automatic pistol. although Cirtex has forged, casted, and constructed the pistol himself. At it's core, it's a reliable 9mm Pistol.

Skin Manipulation:
His Power, Skin Manipulation, basically what this power lets him transform his skin into various materials, ranging from loose and crumbling things like dirt, all the way up to Natural and Artificial things like Iron, Steel, Rubber, Diamond, and various other materials. and if he turns his skin to a non-solid, (like Oxygen or H2O) then his entire body will follow and he will have full control over the molecules and can reform them in different areas. but this has massive drawbacks on it's own

(Prefrences for use in animation are Iron, Steel, Titanium, and Diamond)

As a kind of side effect to Skin manipulation, Cirtex can turn his Muscles to solid Iron, giving him inhuman strength and immense resistance. however, with muscles having more matter to turn to iron, it requires a lot more energy. Granted iron is one the more easier elements to manipulate into, it adds up when you are turning various muscle groups into them.

Ruby : Trauma Kit:
A slandered Issue Trauma Kit.

Nano-Bots:
Ruby Carries a small supply of Nano-Bots programmed to rebuild tissue. they are primarily used for slowly healing flesh wounds after combat.

Deployable Shield:
A shield Ruby can throw down that has a duration of exactly 3 seconds. it protects against all projectiles. nothing short of a ghost can pass through it.



Strengths:

Cirtex : 
Master of MMA and Firearms.

can change the material of his skin in the blink of an eye

Keeps his equipment to a minimum so that his movement isn't hindered.

Can turn his Muscles to Solid Iron to give him immense strength and resistance to keep things like blades and bullets from copping off limbs or turning him into Swiss cheese

Ruby : Extremely Fast.

Perfect Timing

Practically a moving hospital.


Weaknesses:
Cirtex : The tougher the material, the more demanding it is on his stamina. changing to his skin to something like Titanium will cause him to pass out from exhaustion if he holds it over a minute . because of this he prefers materials that aren't too demanding. like Iron, Copper, Nickel.

if he turns himself into a non-solid, he will pass out If he uses it for longer than 20 seconds. and when he comes out of it he will need a moment to catch his breath.

Cannot use a Melee weapon to save his life. (This includes Blades, Daggers, Nunckuchs. but he can still swing a baseball bat)

Cannot have his muscles turned to Iron for more than 2 or 3 minutes (depending on how exhaustion he already is). if he holds it for longer then he will either pass out from exhaustion, or his body will collapse in an effort to regain strength.

Ruby : 
Can't take more than a few punches before going down, due to the fragile nature of her complex internal systems.

She has 0 offensive capabilities

Shield has a 1 minute cool down, which can seem like a long time in the middle of combat.

While she may have Nano Bots she doesn't have many, she has about 1 teaspoons worth of Nanos (Meaning if they were all linked together they would be able to fill a single teaspoon) and these Nanos are older versions. they are extremely slow. to heal a cut from a sword would take an hour. while modern Nnos would only take 10 minutes.

Personality:

Cirtex : Smart-ass
Cocky
Joker (at the best and worst times)
laid back when around friends, He tends to be very animated when in combat. making large, unnecessary gestures to convey what he says. he does this out of combat to.
Loyal friend. If you get to know him and become his friend, then he will always but one foot forward if you are threatened.
Straightest moral compass of all moral compasses, except when he is pissed, then fuck morals.
He is an Fair and Honorable Fighter, as long as the Opponent is as well.

Ruby : Kind,
Caring,
witty
Bubbly and bright when Cirtex is not fighting
cautious and patient when Cirtex is fighting.


(Full biography: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=16202 )

Summary:
Cirtex was born and Raised to a wealthy family In the land of Spero, far from Ceir. Cirtex grew a fondness for Fighting from seeing his parents Fight, His father was a beast master and his mother was a weapons expert. While Cirtex failed miserably by the teachings of his parents to try and pass down their knowledge to him, he excelled in private Hand to Hand MMA Combat.

When trade routes opened between Spero and Ceir Cirtex and his parents got hold of Rice for the first time. the rice granted his mother with unmachable speed and his father with a glowing, healing light. When cirtex got his powers they were unstable, and brought only pain for the longest time. A monk found his way to Cirtex and taught him to control his powers, and the pain was no more.

Cirtex made his way to Ceir to explore the source of the rice that had come to his land. Not long after his arrival he met Ruby, who would quickly become his best friend, then girlfriend, and much soon after that, Lover.


Animated Demo:


Comic Demo


Duelist Statistics:
Rank: Bronze

Full Length Duels: 1 win / 1 loss
Short Length Duels: 0 win / 0 loss
Speed Battles: 0 win / 1 loss
Comic Duels: 0 win / 0 loss

Duel History:
Leif (Applecharm11) VS Cirtex (Cirtex)
Cirtex and Ruby (Cirtex) VS Jaxxon (ChickenWL)
Vireo (Clueboe) vs Cirtex (Cirtex)


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Last edited by Sareth on September 20th, 2018, 7:35 pm, edited 40 times in total.
Reason: Fix up~
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Interesting duelist here man :)
But I see a couple of concerns:
-For starters his power by understatement is, "skin manipulation" which should only affect his external body... So being able to turn his skin into a harder material makes sense but turning it into a rubbery substance doesn't seem all that beneficial considering it's just his skin that's turned to rubber. The rest is still the same like his bones and organs.
-Secondly, being able to turn his skin into dirt... Maybe explain that a bit more cause if it becomes crumbling dirt, would his skin just fall off? Or is like a camo technique?
-The gas ability seems fine and it has a great weakness as well
-lastly... and this is just my opinion... You maybe want to get a bit more detailed and explain some more just to answer any other questions that may come up in the future.

If you fix all this up, you'll have a much better chance of getting accepted ^^
GL and can't wait to see the demo man ;)

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@Cirtex --- Other than what @Jshot had mentioned, you might also want to fix your duelist's banner image. The appropriate size is (horizontal x vertical) 500x200 pixels. Fix this, and everything else Jshot said, up, then you'll have a better chance of being accepted into the roster. Good luck!

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In all honesty I didn't actually think that i would get such a positive response. but any who, let's respond to some of this shall we?

Jshot wrote:
being able to turn his skin into a harder material makes sense but turning it into a rubbery substance doesn't seem all that beneficial


Rubber. It's an insulator. and very Bouncy and elastic. anything having to do with Electricity is out the door and it will help him reach higher points with a single hop.

Jshot wrote:
-being able to turn his skin into dirt... Maybe explain that a bit more cause if it becomes crumbling dirt, would his skin just fall off? Or is like a camo technique?


Like with gas he has partial control over the molecules, so he can keep his skin from simply collapsing on itself, so ya, camo basically.

Jshot wrote:
For starters his power by understatement is, "skin manipulation"


thanks for that one!

Jshot wrote:
GL and can't wait to see the demo man ;)


Well that's gonna take some time.

D4rkRailgunr wrote:
you might also want to fix your duelist's banner image. The appropriate size is (horizontal x vertical) 500x200 pixels.


ya. i know. but phones suck and so does my Paint program. plus that was just a quick mock up for the character. that image is in no way permanent

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Cirtex wrote:
Rubber. It's an insulator. and very Bouncy and elastic. anything having to do with Electricity is out the door and it will help him reach higher points with a single hop.

The insulation part works but it's still just his skin, what would help with help his jump is if his bones were rubber as well

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Jshot wrote:
what would help with help his jump is if his bones were rubber as well


well there is one thing about him that i did forget to add, and that was that his muscles have the potential to turn to Iron. and only iron, which gives him superhuman strength. but with his muscles being much larger and thicker than his skin, it has a similar effect as Titanium that if he does it for too long he will just be so exausted. but in this case he has like 3 miniutes before he passes out as Iron isn't too demanding on its own.

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Duel Mod
I do see you have thought out his weaknesses fairly well in regards to his powers, but out of curiosity, would it not just be simpler to have his skin transmutation and his muscles transmutation just be one power? Since essentially they are one and the same.

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Ceadeus wrote:
I do see you have thought out his weaknesses fairly well in regards to his powers, but out of curiosity, would it not just be simpler to have his skin transmutation and his muscles transmutation just be one power? Since essentially they are one and the same.


Well, they technically are one in the same. but i have now edited the post to give a much more in depth bio/backstory, along a better description of his powers, weaknesses, and personality

Yup Ruby is a AI, i completely forgot about that.

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@ceadeus please review the Forum and tell me what is and is not acceptable. as it has been changed drastically from the first version.

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IT BE COMPLETE!

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