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Duelist Demonstration jojo the unsealed

  by Isa-kuno

Duelist Demonstration jojo the unsealed

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Isa-kuno

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I need you to be patient. i will improve with time ^_^

Also big thanks to hyun for stopping the trolling that was going on in the comment section in the name of "giving advice" being hated just cause a well known animator felt a little "trolly" and me just stepping back because i cant draw well enough and he is well known stick animator is not how i imagined my time at the dojo, if you lack the proper respect then please feel free to click other Video's Give advice to Construct not to destroy, i look up to you guys and if all you can do is tell me how my Animation is shit instead of Telling me what i can do to improve, then you dont deserve my respect.and we shouldnt even be commenting on each others video's i came here to learn among like minded folk not to be Mindlessly mocked cause im not perfect and i also get pissed, just as you do. Happy new year fellow animators.
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Phosphate

· 1483519727
mojo jojo?
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JasonTheBoring

· 1483407256
The heads at the beginning look a bit unusual, it'll be better to make them circle. It would look nice to make the effects yourself, for the After Effects don't look right there, despite being high in quality itself. The random resizing of the black bars and the movement of the VCAM is rather unpleasant. The tweens look odd and there's not much movement, which creates choppiness as a result. It's difficult to understand who's your duelist in this. So yeah. Keep practicing, man.
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Isa-kuno

  JasonTheBoring · 1483410458
I appreciate your input greatly, no more experimenting with heads noted atleast if iam to upload, on the dojo anyway " The random resizing of the black bars " i need a clearer picture there i didn't quite get what you mean and on the final one which is keep practicing, already ahead of you ^_^
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JasonTheBoring

  Isa-kuno · 1483457826
I took a few screenshots to help you understand. Look closely at the top and bottom of each image, with the black in it. The animation goes from (http://i.imgur.com/sngaTL3.png) to (http://i.imgur.com/VMEa8R8.png) back to (http://i.imgur.com/NWnxTTB.png) to (http://i.imgur.com/TrWWdAh.png) to finally without the black (http://i.imgur.com/3zaz02B.png), and it ends up being confusing and unpleasant to the eyes. Another thing I would add is the text scenes; try to have white text on black instead.
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JasonTheBoring

  JasonTheBoring · 1483457893
Despite the many mistakes, however, you seem to have potential for your age, andI hope you'll be able to improve and achieve great things in your future animations :thumbsup:
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Lamitrov

· 1483406601
Wow this is so good that my dick is actually exploding right now
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yunero

· 1483406091
The heads are so fucked up. Try holding Shift while scaling next time. The After Effects just don't fit in this animation. It's so high in quality compared to the animation itself and it just ends up making it look messy as a whole. The VCAM is terrible. The dialogue makes no sense. The tweens are unnecessary and there is so little movement. When there is movement, it's choppy. I don't even know which one is your fucking duelist. so yeah. terrible.
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yunero

  yunero · 1483406116
what am I doing
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Rike

  yunero · 1483463597
The heads are so fucked up. Try holding Shift while scaling next time. The After Effects just don't fit in this animation. It's so high in quality compared to the animation itself and it just ends up making it look messy as a whole. The VCAM is terrible. The dialogue makes no sense. The tweens are unnecessary and there is so little movement. When there is movement, it's choppy. I don't even know which one is your fucking duelist. so yeah. terrible.
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awfulwaffle

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The heads are so fucked up. Try holding Shift while scaling next time. The After Effects just don't fit in this animation. It's so high in quality compared to the animation itself and it just ends up making it look messy as a whole. The VCAM is terrible. The dialogue makes no sense. The tweens are unnecessary and there is so little movement. When there is movement, it's choppy. I don't even know which one is your fucking duelist. so yeah. terrible.
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Isa-kuno

  awfulwaffle · 1483403610
Thanks for your Fucking constructive criticism I’ll put that in mind next time I am not giving a shit, have you seen my previous animations I am working my ass off to improve and all you say is a bunch of bullshit negative stuff, I don’t use flash I use a different software, I have to manually use V cam meaning fail till I succeed, so next time you see an animation I did show up on the portal, I don’t care if you are well known animator, do me a favor and fuck off.
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Plank

  Isa-kuno · 1483406414
Boy you completely rekt him with that nonsense shit you just spewed, because I mean, being straight forward is definitely a negative opinion or a demoralizing attempt
on a serious note You will not improve until you learn to accept the criticism that is given to you. Or I guess you expect people to give you the sugarcoated kind of criticism, Besides, it's not like you would understand any kind of proper criticism given that you're probably 10 years old
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Isa-kuno

  Plank · 1483407715
And you...yes (1) I am 10 you nailed it. secondly I will Improve whether you think I will or not, you never were relevant to the equation, you never showed me anything, it’s funny how people act like big shot's and want to start something over stick figures. Something that should be done for fun. You think I messed up Good tell me when and were like a rational none ten year old that you are, Hyun himself has been a huge help, he doesn’t sound like a condescending prick when giving advice.
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JasonTheBoring

  Isa-kuno · 1483407935
You're 10? mmmmmoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODSSSSSSSSSSS
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