just my duelist demo hope you enjoy
HintHunter
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i loved what you had so far, too bad there was not more of it for you to show up, but i see some impressive stuff and ideas, i hoping to see more out of you.
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Liss
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Sorry but this demo doesn't show any of your characters abilities, or any fighting at all. This won't get approved as an acceptable demo
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Proboi
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Whaaat really ok well will see if the moderators take it but could you tell me what could still use work?
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Liss
Proboi · 1510974239
1. In about a 1 min 20 second long animation, there was about 25 seconds of actual content. That means about only 1/4 of your video had something interesting.
2. The actual animation part is more like a tween test, for the background and for the character. I don't see how this could be thought of as anything other than a practice/test animation.
3. The parts where you didn't tween were choppy because you didn't add enough frames like you did for the tweened parts.
Bad composition.
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2. The actual animation part is more like a tween test, for the background and for the character. I don't see how this could be thought of as anything other than a practice/test animation.
3. The parts where you didn't tween were choppy because you didn't add enough frames like you did for the tweened parts.
Bad composition.
