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Yullis Demonstration

  by Mayru

Yullis Demonstration

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Mayru

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This is my duelist for dojo duels. I hope I will see here constructive criticism.
BTW I forgot to add sound effects and I'm too busy and lazy to go back and add it...

YT: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e5MYYSH8J1A
Duelist page: http://www.hyunsdojo.com/community/viewtopic.php?f=48&t=18139&hilit
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Okidox

· 1527304327
When she slams the enemy into the ground with the tenacle it lacked IMPACT, you culd have changed the shot 2 a close up when the enemy hits the ground. The enemy hitting the ground is the focus of that section of the anim right? It should probably be more upfront and center rather than in the distance. All in all Great job. Duelist page pls?
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Mayru

  Okidox · 1527323088
Finally, useful comment :D Thank you for large CnC!!! I really appreciate it!
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Okidox

  Mayru · 1527525548
Welp u asked for it Ɑ: I am glad to give it! Your welcome!
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Okidox

  Okidox · 1527525568
feel free to CnC any of my work
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Okidox

· 1527304299
Here's ur CnC as requested:
loved the use of angles, ur dust clouds culd use more work, more time on screen or more details. Would have liked to have seen the tentacle that she blocks with the energy shield on its own for a sec as it approaches her. When the shield breaks, there isnt IMPACT. When she punches the enemy; for all the force she seems to hit it with the enemy gets knocked back 2 slow.
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Tarz

· 1527185172
Gawsh, this is really great.
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Kazu

· 1527090909
i like this alot
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Mayru

  Kazu · 1527090982
W-woooooow, ty :D
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dmorgan2089

  Mayru · 1527271527
i love it
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BeepBot

· 1526958102
just gotta ask, what were your inspirations for this?
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Mayru

  BeepBot · 1526995461
I wasn't really inspired by specific animation or animator, I just saw a lot of people do their own duelist so I thought it can be fun! The biggest inspiration is probably TG.108 vs THE UNKNOWN by Afrotique.
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Date Submitted: May 3rd, 2018, 5:14 am
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