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Duelist Demonstration [Re-Upload]

  by FlashMatrix

Duelist Demonstration [Re-Upload]

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FlashMatrix

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Heya! It's been 3 months since i posted something here to be active. Anyway, here is my duelist demo. His name was Aztra "The Executioner" I have been practicing angle scene and other things even though i don't have a tablet. So a decent criticism is really appreciated for my future animation. Enjoy!

Music: Linkin Park - Lost in the Echo
A big thanks for Andrew and Rhuke for helping me with this and giving tips.
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legendarybits

· 1528130649
effects won't win against good and realistic movements.
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  legendarybits · 1528149599
Alright, thanks. I'll keep that in mind...
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tobanga

· 1527440682
Sorry if I'm gonna be that guy but this animation is really bad. Like both the character animation AND the effects are really bad in their own right. Like when you spread 5 stickfigure frames into 2 seconds, or let a character stay in a really awkward pose for a second (like wtf is that https://imgur.com/a/tcioztr)
You can overblow effects until you cant tell what's going gon, like place lensflares in every second shot or do place action lines in two direction on scenes where nothing is moving
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  tobanga · 1527459763
Oh my bad for that, coz that's the first time i did something like that; But man, don't have to imply that the animation itself are indecent and act like you are willing to throw and shoot me down. What i was asking was criticicms not just pointing out flaws in a harsh way.
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  FlashMatrix · 1527460026
Instead, give some advice that i can follow or any suggestion to help, for the future animation as well...
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Olek

· 1527414719
Inspired by Mark? Its decent, try to make the movements faster.
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  Olek · 1527416824
Yeah man, Thanks ill do it on future animations :D
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Exanneon

· 1527337164
you have much potential, going to sub, though i cant bare to watch much of it because of lag
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  Exanneon · 1527352461
Ohh yeah thanks man, i tried uploading the converted mp4 version so it will not lag but it didn't work so i have to put the swf file.
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Exanneon

  FlashMatrix · 1527365418
you have to make the mp4 720p and then it will work
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  Exanneon · 1527416858
I reupload it, you can watch it again without lag :^)
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PigguProductions

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Effects are beautiful. It really surprises me that you didn't use a tablet because this is beautiful. One thing i recommend is changing around some of the SFX to appropriate places, because a few just really confuse me why they are in certain places. Apart from that, really good!
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FlashMatrix

  PigguProductions · 1527290445
Thank you so much man, I'll do it :D Thanks for the suggestion
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