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Wolverine Origins: The Tribute

  by Mustika

Wolverine Origins: The Tribute

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Mustika

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Hello again, Dojo fellows.

I decided to finally upload this as a form of participation to a recent SP competition called Film Tribute Competition (this can be uploaded now because apparently this one didn't make it to SP front page). I'm aware there used to be a similar competition with film based before with a longer due date (around 5 months if I recall correctly) and I'm really pitying myself for the lack of time I'd had to finish this which is in 2 months only. Oh well, lesson learnt anyway and I'm still pleased with this considering this is my very first full-length project.
Little note: Hope you all don't mind with the SP intro (credits to Oxob3000) since I'm not allowed to change everything after the submission. Sorry if it bothers.

This animation has received 2nd place on Beginner category (there are 2 more categories other than this and in higher level: Intermediate and Professional), 47/90 points in total (the animation has to be minimum 55 points to be eligible for SP featuring), and $125 out of it.

Watch it on DA or read the full desc if you wish here: http://fav.me/d8liqh6
Might gonna consider on uploading this on YT if the amount of lag is inevitable, still not sure with it.

Enjoy~, and CnC is appreciated. Thanks for watching.
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Corn

· 1428841462
Nice attempt at story telling. I like how you tried to add in various angles and can see that you're trying to make it look as cinematic as possible. However, the text was really difficult to read since there was not enough time to read them and the camera was shaking all the time. It'll be nice to have the text be clearer and not have them show WHILE the action is going on. The pacing of the animation could use some work as the attacks feel really weak. Still, good job and keep practicing!
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datstickdude

· 1428202048
lololoolololo can watch diz forever
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Reb

· 1428065986
Great job on the overall delivery, mustika. Tho the action part really lacks a lot of force lol. I could see a lot of effort was put in this tho, especially with the backgrounds. And I could imagine the real voices while watching lmao.
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Mustika

  Reb · 1428118506
I'm so agreeing your statement about the weak force on the action parts XD Least I finally know what I have to improve next time. Your appreciation means a lot, Reb. Thank you so much~.
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MarkxD

· 1428063158
wonderful, it was fun to watch, nice :)
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Mustika

  MarkxD · 1428118366
I wish I could do better than this, hopefully next time still. Thanks a lot Mark, I really appreciate it ^u^
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Ipman

· 1427767777
Nice! Could've used more action haha, thanks for placing me in the creds bro!
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Mustika

  Ipman · 1427776963
I know haha, wish I could but to be honest I did focus on the story telling when first making this. Turns out people look forward onto the fighting scene more so I guess I have to improve the choreography next time. Thanks for your support all this time, bro :D
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Date Submitted: March 28th, 2015, 11:30 pm
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