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Dojo Duel Nyem vs Ados

  by hydrios

Dojo Duel Nyem vs Ados

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hydrios

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My first dojo duel against Pace4. (don't pay attention to the background... did my best :( )

Hope you like it ;)
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thepandara

· 1457453746
Well, im not sure if I was following what was going on. Many part didn't add up to each other. The animation in itself wasn't bad but yea...mmmh :

- Too many unnecessary camera switch, couldn't follow the story
- Sometime you try to sync your animation, if you want to make a sync animation, you better do it all the way, not just half of it.
- The scene when he says he won't give up...is it me or Ados is masturbating?

Anyway, animation is good, just gotta work a lot on the storytelling.
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hydrios

  thepandara · 1457454600
All the animation is synced, some parts are just hard to sync, i'm not gonna do as much story next time coz i suck ;o , and nope, he's not masturbating xD. anyway thanks ^^
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thepandara

  hydrios · 1457492927
Sync is really hard...you'll get it in no time i'm sure! And STORY IS A MUST in an animation like dojo duel since its based on a story itself.

Do some storyboarding before starting animating, create a story using everything around you (The world of Cier, your story, the story of your rival, etc.) Ppl will be more captivated in your short if there's a story behind all those mouvement.

Keep working hard!!! Can't wait to see more ^^
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LordWexis

· 1457033830
I love it <3 but 1 tip ADD SHADINGS OR OTHER COLORS ON FAR GROUND ! cuz without it its looks like 1 ground and when nyem fall i dnt see other grounds. If u know what i mean cuz my gramma sucks but animation of other is the best !
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Goldilust

· 1457030204
This was nice , the intro was a little too long and you gotta work on some of the perceptive in some parts and they were other parts that i didn't know what was happening to be honest <.< but i still liked it
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Zakuren

· 1457019632
Dude that was pretty good heh maybe will spar one day i still need training
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hydrios

  Zakuren · 1457019681
Sure ^^. Can't wait it happens ;) !
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Pace4

· 1457018563
that was really entertain to watch! Bg is better than I expected. the anim itself is already cool but would've been better if you delete those line that they are standing(kinda bugging me lol). 5/5 btw
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hydrios

  Pace4 · 1457019207
You also got that 5/5 man ^^.
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Date Submitted: March 3rd, 2016, 5:02 am
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